A Kiss to Build a Scene On with Mary Connealy

When you think of a kiss to build a dream on, what comes to mind?

Cowboys – pure and simple. 100% raw man, hat or not, crossing a field or dismounting his steed to sweep his darlin’ into his arms. Yep, what an image!

In all truth, romance can happen in any era, but Mary Connealy brings it wrapped in chaps and sporting a Stetson. Perfectly fine with me and it’s evident by the fact that I own every book she’s ever written (except the ones still stocked on her computer).  From cowboys at Christmas, to gun slingers and singing hostages, or compulsive kissers who adopt orphans- you are certain to find adventure, romance, and humor between the pages of a Connealy Classic

 To get more details about her books, check out her website at www.maryconnealy.com

Well, enough gushing from the fan, let’s lasso Mary in and ask her a few questions.

So, Mary, what do you think makes a good kissing scene?

I’ve always liked a kissing scene where neither party particularly wants to kiss but circumstances throw them together and they find themselves kissing with no plan to and no real understanding of what exactly came over them. I like the denial, the impulse, the attraction that gets out of hand.

  One thing I’d done several times is some version of her saying, “Let go of me,” as if the man was the aggressor and the woman didn’t welcome the kiss. Then, when he lets go, it’s not all that easy because he has to help her unwind her arms from around his neck.

And I’m just sure you have a great excerpt for us to read?

Here’s an excerpt from The Husband Tree

Shorty woke Roy and the two of them left the camp quietly. Silas heard them go and lay awake until Belle, Lindsay, and Emma all came riding in. The snow had stopped and the night was sharply cold but not bitter. The women went straight to caring for their horses.

            Silas pushed aside his blanket, stood, and walked over to Belle. He rested his hand on her elbow. “Let’s step away from the campfire for a second.”

            Belle nodded and followed him as the girls worked their horses. Silas stayed where the sleeping girls and Lindsay and Emma working with their mounts were in their line of sight.

            Silas whispered, “I just wanted to remind you that you have to show me a bit of affection from time to time to keep this idea in these men’s heads that we’re married.”

            “What?” Belle’s shocked question rang out clearly enough to be heard down the whole mountainside.

            Silas squeezed her elbow. “Shhh. What else? A wife gives her husband a kiss now and then. You’ll do it, too!”

            “Silas,” she began sternly, but at least she wasn’t yelling, “I am not—”

            Silas shut her up by kissing her, and when she melted against him it occurred to Silas that this was the most fun he’d ever had in his life. It was the plain honest truth that he was a happy man when he was tormenting Belle Tanner. He eased his lips away from her and said with his mouth a bare inch from her ear, “I’ll sleep with the men.”

            Belle shuddered and Silas breathed softly against her ear again to see if she’d repeat the telltale movement. She did.

            “Silas,” Belle said with reluctant protest, “what about the girls? They can’t see us behaving in a way that’s not proper. They’ll think—”

            “I already told them what we had to do. They understand.” Silas leaned closer again and murmured, “Now think, darlin’, the yarn I spun these boys is the only one we could have told. When it gets down to it, me being along on this drive with you is about as improper as anything can be.”

“No, it’s not. The girls are better chaperones than a fire and brimstone preacher backed by a convent full of nuns.”

Silas grinned. “That is the honest truth. But I’m here as your husband while these men are with us. We have to make do as best we can.”

“But it’s all a lie, Silas. I’ll spend my night praying for forgiveness for this nonsense. All you had to do was be honest.”

He kissed her again because it seemed to quiet her down. “Now I’ve been calling you my woman and the girls my girls. I’ve been real careful not to say the word wife and daughters.”

“You told the girls to call you pa. Don’t try and pretend that’s not a lie.”

He was holding a smart woman in his arms. He found it suited him. “Well, I’ve already asked for forgiveness and I feel like God understands. Which means you’re more stubborn than God, and why am I not surprised?”
            Belle jerked her arm out of his grip, but Silas caught it and reeled her back in for one last kiss.  When she’d calmed clear down to being limp in his arms, he pulled back just enough to whisper in her pretty ear, “I think we’ve been over here long enough.”

He said it all scolding like, as if Belle was keeping him over here just because she wanted a few minutes of privacy to smooch. “Now you go on back to camp and behave yourself.”

Mary, I absolutely love the way you get inside Silas’ head. Love it. As usual, you had me alternating between a chuckle and a sigh. The humor, the romance, sneaking kisses…. Did I say kisses? They’re everywhere – and the more the merrier.

That’s why the Kiss to Build a SCENE On BlogFEST continues next week, starting  off with another western, romance, and humor writer – Deeanne Gist. I’ll post the new lineup tomorrow – so stop on by for more!

Kissing Quote for the Day:

“A kiss can be a comma, a question mark, or an exclamation point. That’s basic spelling that any woman ought to know.” – Jeanne Bourgeois

Bible Kissing Quote for the day:

(This is one of my FAVORITES)

My dear lover glows with health—
   red-blooded, radiant!
He’s one in a million.
   There’s no one quite like him!
My golden one, pure and untarnished,
   with raven black curls tumbling across his shoulders.
His eyes are like doves, soft and bright,
   but deep-set, brimming with meaning, like wells of water.
His face is rugged, his beard smells like sage,
   His voice, his words, warm and reassuring.
Fine muscles ripple beneath his skin,
   quiet and beautiful.
His torso is the work of a sculptor,
   hard and smooth as ivory.
He stands tall, like a cedar,
   strong and deep-rooted,
A rugged mountain of a man,
   aromatic with wood and stone.
His words are kisses, his kisses words.
   Everything about him delights me, thrills me
      through and through!

Her turn to check him out, eh? Her words, her praise, is  cloaked in a fragrance of love. And I thought the ‘rugged mountain of a man’ part might compliment Mary’s scene :-) We’re inside the bride’s head as she scans down the body of her lover. The phrase “his words are kisses, his kisses words” is absolutely lovely. Again, she’s painting a picture with visual imagery, smells, and touches. Fantastic and breathtaking.

Kissing Day Blogfest

Oh what fun! Ruthy and Kissing Blogfest all in the same day! And Christmas is only 4 days away. Plus, I have chocolate chip cookie pizza in the oven.
Wow, it doesn’t get much better than this.                                                                                                                 
So, what is Kissing Blogfest Day?  Write a kissing scene or ‘almost’ kissing scene in honor of Christmas and the magical romance associated with Mistle Toe.                                                                     
Some scenes from other participants have been outstanding and truly get you in a kissing mood. Actually, it shot me into a writing mood – but that has to wait until after the kids go to bed…and after I enjoy some chocolate chip cookie pizza :-)                                                                                   
To learn the official rules, check out A Writer Wannabe at: http://sherrindak.blogspot.com/

I’m not sure I want to put an ‘almost’ kiss scene. I need closure. Hmm…maybe I’ll put one that has a little of both :-)

Here’s an excerpt from my novel, It Had to Be You – American in England :-)

Eisley dabbed her eyes and fisted the handkerchief, her voice cloaked with tears.
“You make me feel things…” She pressed her fist over her heart and shook her head, new tears escaping down her cheeks and searing his self-control.
Wes stepped closer, trying his best to take it slow. He should have earned an award for self-control after all the waiting he’d done lately, but she was worth it.
Her lips fell into a pout, a plump, silky-looking pout. God, help me.
“I don’t want to be…vulnerable…or hurt again.”
The pain in her eyes twisted at his heart. Yes, he could take it slow.
He tilted her face up with a gentle touch of his hand. His words formed on a whisper. “Do you think I would hurt you?”
Her gaze lifted, emerald pools of sorrow, and she shook her head in defeat, breaths uneven.
“I’m sorry. You’re right. I’m acting like an idiot. It isn’t as though I should be afraid of you… returning any of these feelings, right? Crazy. You probably have women do this all the time, maybe not in a 15th century tower, but…”
She offered an apologetic smile and drew her chin from his hand, tears still waiting in her eyes. “You make a great friend, but for you and me…”
Her laugh sounded a little too much like a sob. She patted his arm and tried to move past him. “It’s ridiculous. I shouldn’t even…I’m so sorry.”
He stopped her escape with a hand to her arm. “Why do you say that, Eisley?” His thumb swept a rebel tear from her cheek and dropped to rest on her shoulder. “I care about you in a very real way.
She blinked and stepped back, just outside his reach. “As a friend, I know, and you’re a wonderful…”
“No, something much more dear.” He tightened the gap between them with another step.
She stumbled away, her eyes searching his, confused. “But I’m not interested in a weekend romance or even a month long fling. My heart can’t take it and my kids…”
“I’m not looking for that either.” Wes took another step closer.
“What? A few months of a long distance relationship?” She challenged with an angled brow, a hint of fire in those green depths.
She pushed his handkerchief back in his hands. “Maybe a year?” She shook her head and her next backward step placed her against the stone wall. “I’m not that kind of girl.”
His lips threatened to smile. He loved to watch her face come to life when she was angry.
Fascinating, really.

He closed the distance between them, tilting his head to hold her gaze. “I was thinking more like…um…‘til death do us part’.” Brilliant. So much for taking slow.

He rushed ahead. “I’m not asking for a commitment right now, only an awareness of my feelings and my sincere desire to win your heart.”
She firmed her chin and examined him through narrowed eyes. “This isn’t funny.”
It was his turn to feel surprised. “I’m quite serious, I assure you.”
She pressed her body against the wall, her expression moving through a myriad of emotions…doubt and hope vying for success. The poor dear was utterly confused, her lovely lips opening and closing without a word escaping.
He leaned closer, gentling his voice and waiting for her eyes to meet his. “Do you have any reason to doubt my sincerity, Eisley?”
His fingers smoothed a line down her arm and she shivered. Should he dare draw her into his arms now? Was she ready?
“You’ve introduced me to more life and hope this past week than I’ve felt in years. I don’t want to see my future without you in it.”
The wariness in her eyes wavered, so did her lips, and she snatched back the handkerchief. “Is that a line from a movie?”
He pushed a ginger tendril from her damp cheek and shook his head. “This isn’t pretend.”
She lifted both eyebrows in question.He grinned and glanced about the five hundred year old tower room. “Alright, fantastic…but not pretend.”
Hope dawned in her eyes, slow and steady, like a sunrise. She raised her palm to his cheek, warm, soft and trembling a bit. Mint lingered in the air and urged him forward.
Her voice breathed the words in a shaky whisper. “Okay, you are real. I had to check.” She sniffed, her smile growing. “Because I have a very good imagination.”
His lips sought her palm, and her quick intake of breath encouraged him to trail kisses down to her wrist. “I’d like to …um…. court you through letters…and email.”
“Court me?”
“Yes, allow our feelings to grow and develop through time and…” He grimaced. “Distance.”
Eisley swallowed. “And then? When you return to your real world and I return to mine? After you’ve won this single-mum’s heart?”
He captured her hand from his cheek, and braided his fingers through hers, the feeling of their touch like a key to the lock of his heart. Perfect fit.
 “I plan to make her my bride…if she’ll have me?”
“You’re bride?” She whispered and then a giggle burst from her lips as she wiped tears from her face with the handkerchief. “Why?”
“Why?” His grin broadened. “Because you’re lovely, compassionate, tender-hearted, funny, joyful.” He tweaked a brow. “Did I say lovely?”
Her smile bloomed and drew his attention back to her lips.
She dropped her head, shaking it slowly from side to side. “Talk about crazy. This feels impossible, you know that?”
“God masters in the impossible, right?” He placed his hand on the wall above her head, leaning closer, her face tilting up to his.
“Have you been talking to my mom?”
Her gaze flickered to his lips and back, her shallow breath fanning his chin and sending a whiff of chocolate chip granola. Suddenly the room felt like a sauna.
He edged closer, lowering his hand to cup her cheek, his smile fading, as through hooded eyes he focused on her mouth. The mouth that had been a constant temptation since the day he met her.
Rosemary mingled with mint and chocolate chip in a wonderfully intoxicating way. Who was caught now?
She leaned her head back against the wall, eyes drifted closed and moist lips parted, slightly, in expectation of a kiss. Her breath blended with his, faster…closer.
“Wesley? Eisley? Are you there?”
His lips hovered near enough to feel her mouth stretch into a smile.
Lizzie’s voice drifted up through the stairwell just beyond the locked door.
“Eisley. Christopher Wesley.”
“Hmm, to be continued?” Eisley kinked a brow, her gaze a reflection of the embers in his chest.
He snuck a quick kiss, which only whetted his appetite for more, and growled. “Soon.”
She sighed and stepped toward the door. “It’d better be soon or I won’t believe it happened at all.”
“We can’t have that now, can we?” His arm swept about her waist and pulled her forward his lips covering her surprised ones, tasting their softness and warmth, with a hint of chocolate.
She released a satisfied moan and ran her hands up his arms to link about his neck, her passion matching his own. He drew her closer, lost in her scent and taste, a warmth shuddering through him with a sweet sense of home.
The door clanked from another shake. “Wesley. Eisley.”